Give your honest opinions please.

[freeringo]

"I was only whispering
In his mouth"


I sense a bit of denial in your words.
I hope your new baby brings out more positive
creations form you.
It sounds like you have had an emotional rocky road.
Don't get me wrong, People have written their best stuff when they are emotionally beaten down.
I just feel that your best stuff is yet come.
Keep working on it.

A taste of my negative past.
I wrote a song that goes something like this:

I'm not a very nice guy
I want to spit in your eye.
It's who I am
and I'll be damned forever.
You say that's tough
I've had enough of you.

Look at this world we live in
It's nothing but a piece of trash
I'm your friendly garbage man
You can go kiss my a--.

It's who I am
and I'll be damned forever.
You say that's tough
I've had enough of you.

Then another I wrote:

sample:

You keep me hanging on ....Baby
I don't know what to do
You got my head spinninng, girl
THINK AGAIN

I need you
I need you
Need your love
Need your love

You broke my heart,
One more time
You make me crazy
all the time
I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please
THINK AGAIN

I need you
I need you
Need your love
Need your love

I______ NEED_______ YOU_____________

[KaciBlakely]

Yeah ringo I have a bit of a bumpy road.

Those songs were mainly written before I met my husband, I think all of them were actually.

I don't think I'm fully confident in my songs, but I love to write freeverse even if nothing comes of it, and it's only just for me.

I love, love, love your song.

It reminds me of many things I have wanted to do to others for some reason.

And I think alot of really good stuff, comes out through pain because people use it as an outlet, but what do I know?

I'm just a book editor and want-to-be author.