Looking for your opinion

[twenty47]

if i make you one eejit you will have to send me your address and then one day I just may knock on your door and ask you to babysit my son and I then I'll travel Europe for a few months, ha ha. just kidding, but email me your addy if you want a gift MAYBE

I was thinking of trying the black cap for a layout, this one is khaki and i know not to wear a white one. teehee

but nobody's said anything yet on design, text etc. does that look okay? is there something else i should write on there, or maybe use "Alias" instead of "Player" to put my poker name on there.