NDN Poetry

[taylovesthebeatles]

Not bad, not bad! I can't come up with anything like this on the spot, that's for sure. Maybe I'll be inspired.

[knowledge]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I am a sick ...
and eejit is too!

[navuta]

Im alone on this path?
We are somebody else?
Might I just be forget?
It is time to relax.

Being here is just enouth.
People here are just right.
I love they way they fight.
NDN is just the best site.

This sounde more like a rap..
But I tryed to do a poem..

[navuta]

Im alone on this path?
We are somebody else?
Might I just be forget?
It is time to relax.

Being here is just enouth.
People here are just right.
I love they way they fight.
NDN is just the best site.

This sounde more like a rap..
But I tryed to do a poem..

I think all those rhimes sucks...
Hey.. dont think we fight...
Just on the tables.
please...
All u are very nice people.


Cycling on bush's
Of scraths necessary.
Breathing hard for my heart.
Is time to be alive.


What about this on one?
I clycled 30 km today..
Was fun..

[BnLM5]

I think all those rhimes sucks...
Hey.. dont think we fight...
Just on the tables.
please...
All u are very nice people.


Cycling on bush's
Of scraths necessary.
Breathing hard for my heart.
Is time to be alive.


What about this on one?
I clycled 30 km today..
Was fun..

Navuta, I think you have lost you cotton picken mind... as "What about this....on one?" ???????

[navuta]

Navuta, I think you have lost you cotton picken mind... as "What about this....on one?" ???????

humm..
was just a small mistake.
...

WOW... such bad term u used.
Are you out of your cotton picking mind?

COTTON-PICKING - as an adjective cotton-picking "is widespread as a term of disparagement. Damned, darned." From the "Dictionary of American Regional English," Volume 1 by Frederic G. Cassidy (1985, Belknap Press of Harvard University Press, Cambridge, Mass., and London, England).

[BnLM5]

Navuta I chose to use the slang cotton pickin as a lesser of two evil so to speak.

Cotton pickin instead of G** Damn....

Cotton pickin instead of Dumb F***ing ....

rather in a fun way and not a rude way.

I did not mean to insult you.

NDN is a site that welcomes and shares a great deal of diversities.

Realizing cultures are different, and sometime we forget this so...

I apologize if I offended you in the wrong way.

But you should open your mind to the fact that I meant is with a light heart.

check it here (Urban Dictionary: Cotton Pickin).

Nonetheless I wasn't even talking about an error, I was talking about the entire post.

What is it you exactly that you are posting here or trying to say? Are you just thinking

out loud, while you doodle in this thread? Because it's rambling. It's not poetry.

[BnLM5]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I am a sick ...
and eejit is too!

I am curious Knowledge when you say "sick"

do you mean sick as in ill?

Or do you mean sick as in Siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiickkkk! "basically bad to the bone"